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Saturday, July 6, 2013

I Quote, You 'Ku - Day 6

"Once upon a time there was a wise man who used to go to the ocean to do his writing. He had a habit of walking on the beach before he began his work. One day he was walking along the shore. As he looked down the beach, he saw a human figure moving like a dancer. He smiled to himself to think of someone who would dance to the dawn. So he began to walk faster to catch up.
As he got closer, he saw that it was a young man and the young man wasn't dancing, but instead he was reaching down to the shore, picking up something and very gently throwing it into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out, 'Good morning! What are you doing?' 
The young man paused, looked up and replied, 'Throwing starfish in the ocean.' 
'I guess I should have asked, why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?' 
'The sun is coming up, and the tide is going out. And if I don't throw them in they'll die.' 
'But, young man, don't you realize that there are miles and miles of beach, and starfish all along it. You can't possibly make a difference!'
The young man listened politely. Then bent down, picked another starfish and threw it into the sea, past the breaking waves and said, 'It made a difference for that one.'"

~Author Unknown

Your challenge is to write a haiku or tanka (or choose one of your previously published works) that has a connection with the themes/feelings/images of the above quote, without just restating what has appeared in the text, to create a haibun. Play around with it and see what you come up with. Enjoy!

Click here for the first post on how I Quote, You 'Ku works. Every poet who posts a poem this month will be entered into the draw to win a copy of A New Resonance 8.
 

11 comments:

  1. How does one clean all
    The grains of sand on a beach?
    One gain at a time.

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  2. Salibya...
    a wet dog shakes off
    the sea

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    1. Thanks for joining us, Gillena. :-)
      I've put you in the book draw!

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  3. "Once upon a time there was a wise man who used to go to the ocean to do his writing. He had a habit of walking on the beach before he began his work. One day he was walking along the shore. As he looked down the beach, he saw a human figure moving like a dancer. He smiled to himself to think of someone who would dance to the dawn. So he began to walk faster to catch up.

    As he got closer, he saw that it was a young man and the young man wasn't dancing, but instead he was reaching down to the shore, picking up something and very gently throwing it into the ocean.

    As he got closer he called out, 'Good morning! What are you doing?'

    The young man paused, looked up and replied, 'Throwing starfish in the ocean.'

    'I guess I should have asked, why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?'

    'The sun is coming up, and the tide is going out. And if I don't throw them in they'll die.'

    'But, young man, don't you realize that there are miles and miles of beach, and starfish all along it. You can't possibly make a difference!'

    The young man listened politely. Then bent down, picked another starfish and threw it into the sea, past the breaking waves and said, 'It made a difference for that one.'"

    this one wish a thousand paper cranes

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  4. A haiku from Sasa Vazic:

    winding road . . .
    a wandering voice
    returns

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  5. A haiku from Angelo Ancheta:

    lone starfish ...
    a little burst of sunlight
    to guide me home

    Thanks for joining in, Angelo. I've added your name to the book draw! :-)

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  6. purpose of life
    touching the softness of cloud
    drains all agonies
    all along the shoreline
    before mingling with the vastness

    Simply Haiku, Autumn 2010, Vol.8, No.2 (Tanka Ed. Amelia Fielden)

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  7. July 6: starfish

    one less plastic bag
    swirling on the tide
    a difference to the sea

    Gary Blankenship

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  8. caretta caretta
    into this sea
    I pray you home 

    from the haibun "Symbiosis" CHO April 1, 2012

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