"Once upon a time there was a wise man
who used to go to the ocean to do his writing. He had a habit of
walking on the beach before he began his work. One day he was walking
along the shore. As he looked down the beach, he saw a human figure
moving like a dancer. He smiled to himself to think of someone who
would dance to the dawn. So he began to walk faster to catch up.
As he got closer, he saw that it was a
young man and the young man wasn't dancing, but instead he was
reaching down to the shore, picking up something and very gently
throwing it into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out, 'Good
morning! What are you doing?'
The young man paused, looked up
and replied, 'Throwing starfish in the ocean.'
'I
guess I should have asked, why are you throwing starfish in the
ocean?'
'The sun is coming up, and the tide is going out.
And if I don't throw them in they'll die.'
'But, young man,
don't you realize that there are miles and miles of beach, and
starfish all along it. You can't possibly make a difference!'
The young man listened politely. Then
bent down, picked another starfish and threw it into the sea, past
the breaking waves and said, 'It made a difference for that
one.'"
~Author Unknown
Your challenge is to write a haiku or
tanka (or choose one of your previously published works) that has a
connection with the themes/feelings/images of the above quote, without
just restating what has appeared in the text, to create a haibun. Play
around with it and see what you come up with. Enjoy!
Click here for the first post on how I Quote, You 'Ku works. Every poet who posts a poem this month will be entered into the draw to win a copy of A New Resonance 8.
Click here for the first post on how I Quote, You 'Ku works. Every poet who posts a poem this month will be entered into the draw to win a copy of A New Resonance 8.
How does one clean all
ReplyDeleteThe grains of sand on a beach?
One gain at a time.
Salibya...
ReplyDeletea wet dog shakes off
the sea
Thanks for joining us, Gillena. :-)
DeleteI've put you in the book draw!
"Once upon a time there was a wise man who used to go to the ocean to do his writing. He had a habit of walking on the beach before he began his work. One day he was walking along the shore. As he looked down the beach, he saw a human figure moving like a dancer. He smiled to himself to think of someone who would dance to the dawn. So he began to walk faster to catch up.
ReplyDeleteAs he got closer, he saw that it was a young man and the young man wasn't dancing, but instead he was reaching down to the shore, picking up something and very gently throwing it into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out, 'Good morning! What are you doing?'
The young man paused, looked up and replied, 'Throwing starfish in the ocean.'
'I guess I should have asked, why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?'
'The sun is coming up, and the tide is going out. And if I don't throw them in they'll die.'
'But, young man, don't you realize that there are miles and miles of beach, and starfish all along it. You can't possibly make a difference!'
The young man listened politely. Then bent down, picked another starfish and threw it into the sea, past the breaking waves and said, 'It made a difference for that one.'"
this one wish a thousand paper cranes
in the dark a single candle
ReplyDeleteA haiku from Sasa Vazic:
ReplyDeletewinding road . . .
a wandering voice
returns
A haiku from Angelo Ancheta:
ReplyDeletelone starfish ...
a little burst of sunlight
to guide me home
Thanks for joining in, Angelo. I've added your name to the book draw! :-)
Thanks, Kirsten.
ReplyDeletepurpose of life
ReplyDeletetouching the softness of cloud
drains all agonies
all along the shoreline
before mingling with the vastness
Simply Haiku, Autumn 2010, Vol.8, No.2 (Tanka Ed. Amelia Fielden)
July 6: starfish
ReplyDeleteone less plastic bag
swirling on the tide
a difference to the sea
Gary Blankenship
caretta caretta
ReplyDeleteinto this sea
I pray you home
from the haibun "Symbiosis" CHO April 1, 2012