In June I was the competition judge for the junior section of the New Zealand Poetry Society Haiku Competition. I had a great time doing this job. You can read about it and find out the results here.
Then last month I found out I'd won fifth place in the adult section of the competition. Yay! Great to have finally cracked the top five of my home country's major haiku contest. I was lucky enough to also receive a commended placing. You can read the full judge's report by Nola Borrell here.
My congratulations to all the winners! Next on the New Zealand haiku calendar is the 7th Kokako Haiku & Senryu Competition. Find out all you need to know here.
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Showing posts with label New Zealand Poetry Society. Show all posts
Showing posts with label New Zealand Poetry Society. Show all posts
Wednesday, August 21, 2013
Wednesday, November 14, 2012
Building a time machine

I'm really pleased to once again have haiku in the annual New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, which was edited by Owen Bullock this year. It contains all the winning entries of the NZPS International Haiku and Open Poetry Competitions, as well as work chosen 'blind' by the editor from the remaining poems entered.
My first haiku won a Highly Commended placing:
bus stop
the moonlight
on her cane
This second haiku was chosen by the editor:
his gentle snores
when did I last
see the stars . . .
You can order your copy of the NZPS 2012 anthology Building a time machine here (PayPal is available).
Thursday, September 6, 2012
Straight From the Haijin's Mouth #4
'Straight From the Haijin's Mouth' is one of the features that makes up my haikai column in a fine
line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry. This edition is from the March 2012 issue, and is reprinted with the kind permission of Laurice
Gilbert, Sandra Simpson and Ernest J. Berry.
Straight
From the Haijin's Mouth
I asked award-winning haiku poets, Sandra Simpson and
Ernie Berry, 'What's it like to send your haiku out into the world?'
Sandra
Simpson's answer:
Selecting haiku to send to an editor or judge can be difficult –
they’re all my babies, I love them equally.
As it turns out though, I love some
more equally than others. With experience comes the knowledge that
while some are “publishable” (but not outstanding) some are
altogether better (and some we don’t discuss!).
Most editors like a set of 5-15 haiku
which means I can try some poems that are a bit “different” in
the mix. Re-reading submissions a month later is a good practice –
the haiku often turn out to be not so great as I thought and go back
through the editing process.
Getting to know a journal’s ethos
helps, although editors can often surprise with their choices.
This haiku, for which I never had high
hopes (thinking it was a bit obvious), was published in The
Heron’s Nest and won a Touchstone Award for one of the best
haiku published in English in 2010:
slicing papaya –
the swing
of her black pearls
The poems to which editors and judges
respond are almost invariably (the above example notwithstanding) the
ones where I have strived to be honest about the moment.
This haiku came complete while visiting
Otago Museum and was a runner-up in last year’s HaikuNow! Contest
(limit one haiku; a tough ask):
in the cabinet marked Mesopotamia a
broken face
But I also have plenty of haiku that
will never be published … and that’s okay. To write the good ones
I accept that I have to write the bad ones.
Ernie
Berry's answer: My
first foray into the world of poetry was about age 5 when Aunt Haysl
of Hay's Ltd in Christchurch saw fit to publish one of my poems in
her weekly children's page of the Christchurch Star-Sun. 60 years
later I started dabbling in poetry again as a retirement project in
Mexico where the kindly editor of an American journal targeting
snowbirds* was so impressed with my work that he appointed me 'poetry
editor' and insisted I supply a new poem for every issue forthwith
and recruit other poets from Mexico and California.
After returning to Godzone in 1993, a
friend gave me a book of poetry titled Haiku Menagerie which
proved a life-changer for me because it consisted entirely of 'haiku'
a genre I'd never heard of till then but which catered nicely to my
predilection for poetic brevity. I took to haiku like a duck to a
frogpond and my first haiku was accepted for publication by an Aussie
mag, Paper Wasp in 1995 and within 2 years I was being
published in haiku journals in NZ, USA, Britain, Ireland, Belgium,
Croatia and Argentina, etc., etc. Being published 'world-wide' and
winning the odd contest was quite a thrill and has kept my nose to
the grindstone of octogenarianism...
petrified forest
a child inspects
my legs
a child inspects
my legs
~second place in the ukiaHaiku Festival
Contest 2008
*
people from northern USA who migrate south annually to escape winter.
Wednesday, May 16, 2012
The Haiku Help-Desk
The Haiku Help-Desk is part of my haikai column in a fine line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society. It's a place where readers can learn by
example: in each issue the editor gives feedback on a haiku in such a
way that it shows the reader how they might improve their own haiku or
otherwise learn about the art of writing haiku. The editor sometimes uses their own haiku as the example and other times another poet's work is used. These articles are now being archived on the Haiku NewZ website thanks to Sandra Simpson and Laurice Gilbert. So far you can read:
More will be added over the coming months. Check out other archived articles, as well as book reviews, competition and journal listings, the Showcase of NZ haiku poets and the My Favourite Haiku features while you're visiting. And don't forget about Haiku Festival Aotearoa 2012 - registrations in by June 1st! I'll see you there :)
- The Last Line by Kirsten Cliff
- The Shaping of a Haiku by Margaret Beverland
- Awareness in Haiku by Patricia Prime
More will be added over the coming months. Check out other archived articles, as well as book reviews, competition and journal listings, the Showcase of NZ haiku poets and the My Favourite Haiku features while you're visiting. And don't forget about Haiku Festival Aotearoa 2012 - registrations in by June 1st! I'll see you there :)
Friday, May 11, 2012
Straight From the Haijin's Mouth #3
'Straight From the Haijin's Mouth' is one of the features that makes up my haikai column in a fine
line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry. This edition is from the January 2012 issue, and is reprinted with the kind permission of Laurice
Gilbert, Catherine Mair and Patricia Prime.
Straight
From the Haijin's Mouth
I asked long time friends and poetry writing buddies
Catherine Mair and Patricia Prime, 'Where has your reading and
writing of haiku taken you over the years?'
Catherine Mair's answer:
It
was the late 1980s and I had just started writing poetry. Because of
the economical, rural/nature content it was suggested that I might
find an affinity with haiku.
I'd never heard of haiku. Upon
expressing my ignorance I was sent a few notes on the basics of this
genre. In 1993 the first New Zealand Haiku Anthology included five of
my haiku and the second Anthology (1998) included a number more. My
interest in haiku lead me on a number of journeys the most far flung
being a jaunt to Romania for a haiku conference hosted by Ion
Codrescu. Picton was another very enjoyable destination.
The succinct way of haiku suits my
natural brevity and because of a busy lifestyle the idea of so much
in so little really appealed to me. Haiku satisfied several leanings.
I'd been very interested in painting but farming in partnership with
my husband and bringing up four children left little time. Over the years I've met some superb
people. Haijin seem to share a relatively humble outlook and an acute
sensitivity to nature, including human nature.
There is something about haiku which is spiritually
satisfying. Something which seems akin to creation.
Patricia Prime's answer:
As
co-editor of the New Zealand haiku journal Kokako
for the past 15 issues, I am privileged to have come to know and
correspond with editors and writers throughout the world. I wrote my
first haiku in the 80s and have submitted work to journals in the
USA, Canada, Australia, Great Britain, India and Ireland. What better
way is there to make friends than through poetry?
Martin Lucas says in the Introduction
to his book Stepping Stones: a way into haiku that “Haiku is
not a descriptive poetry, it is a reflective poetry,
and we need to understand that distinction.” Haiku in its own way
is self-counselling; it is a pleasure to read other people’s work
and to study their methods and it is beneficial to write about one’s
own feelings. Haiku is a form that blends sensitivity with realism,
using simple language and clear images and I hope my poems are
accessible to most readers and that they can identify with them in
some way.
I’ve spent half a lifetime in
Auckland, where I’ve lived, worked, brought up my family and found
poetic inspiration and motivation. I’ve also made trips to China,
Tibet, Macau, Australia and the South Island. These were enchanting
journeys and have since lent themselves to my poetry. Writing haiku
has been a long journey: some haiku had their beginnings long ago,
others are very recent. Old memories supply material for my haiku, as
do places I’ve visited, nature, friendships I’ve made and my
family.
In a spiritual sense haiku can be a release for emotion,
can range from the lyrical to the haunting, or be touched with humour
or sadness. A lightness of tone, memory and imagination, are all part
of the spiritual reality of haiku.
Friday, May 4, 2012
Two NZ Haiku Contests Closing In May
Katikati Haiku Contest
Cash prizes totalling $NZ175 in the senior section. All proceeds to the Haiku Pathway project. Judges are Owen Bullock (senior) and Catherine Mair (junior).Closes: In hand May 16.
Cost: Within NZ: 18 & over - $5 for 3 haiku or $2 for 1 haiku. 17 & under - $1 for up to 2 haiku. For overseas entrants: $US5/3 haiku or $US2/haiku.
For full details see the website.
NZPS International Haiku Contest
Top five haiku/senryu will be awarded $NZ100 each; first place will also receive the Jeanette Stace Memorial Prize of $NZ150. Winners will be published in the NZPS annual anthology. Judge is Barbara Strang.Closes: May 31.
Cost: $1.50/haiku, for NZPS members every 5th haiku is free.
Full details from the website.
NZPS Haiku Junior Contest
Cash prizes, plus one winner will also receive the Jeanette Stace Memorial Prize of $NZ100 open only to entrants who are 17 years of age or younger on May 31, 2012. Schools may send bulk entries, but poems must be clearly attributed to authors. Winners will be published in the NZPS annual anthology.Closes: May 31.
Cost: $1/haiku.
Full details from the website. For information on group school entries, go here.
Friday, March 23, 2012
Straight From the Haijin's Mouth #2
'Straight From the Haijin's Mouth' is one of the features that makes up my haikai column in a fine
line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry. This edition is from the November 2011 issue, and is reprinted with the kind permission of Laurice
Gilbert, Nola Borrell and Karen Peterson Butterworth.
Straight From the
Haijin's Mouth
I
asked the co-editors of the latest national haiku anthology the
taste of nashi,
Nola Borrell and Karen Peterson Butterworth, 'What is the most
valuable piece of advice you have ever received about writing haiku?'
Nola
Borrell's answer:
At the risk of being contentious (or not published!), I think
'challenge' is a more useful word than 'advice'. Good haiku depend so
much more on a way of seeing, or as Martin Lucas (Editor, Presence)
says:
'To begin writing haiku, and to make progress to any significant
extent, requires two gifts:
- The ability to be alert to the subtleties of sensory or psychological experience (i.e. to notice things)
- A sensitivity to the subtleties of language (i.e. to be able
to express things).'
http://www.poetrysociety.org.nz/node/460
A challenge from Martin Lucas stimulated me to look more critically at my haiku. He talks about making a 'magical utterance' or a 'poetic spell', something archetypal/ rare/ essential, and in poetic language (4th Haiku Pacific Rim Conference, 2009, Terrigal, Australia). This seems more likely to reduce the human focus frequently dominant or at least intrusive in many current haiku, as well as prosy statements masquerading as haiku. http://www.poetrysociety.org.nz/node/456
A specific suggestion (just to keep in with Co-ordinator Kirsten!): Early in my writing I received this comment on a mainstream poem: How about avoiding weak endings to lines, such as 'of', 'the',' in'. Of course. Why hadn't I seen it! Thanks Harry Ricketts (V.U.W., Co-Editor, New Zealand Books). This makes even more sense in haiku - where each word and line ending is that much more significant.
A challenge from Martin Lucas stimulated me to look more critically at my haiku. He talks about making a 'magical utterance' or a 'poetic spell', something archetypal/ rare/ essential, and in poetic language (4th Haiku Pacific Rim Conference, 2009, Terrigal, Australia). This seems more likely to reduce the human focus frequently dominant or at least intrusive in many current haiku, as well as prosy statements masquerading as haiku. http://www.poetrysociety.org.nz/node/456
A specific suggestion (just to keep in with Co-ordinator Kirsten!): Early in my writing I received this comment on a mainstream poem: How about avoiding weak endings to lines, such as 'of', 'the',' in'. Of course. Why hadn't I seen it! Thanks Harry Ricketts (V.U.W., Co-Editor, New Zealand Books). This makes even more sense in haiku - where each word and line ending is that much more significant.
Karen
Peterson Butterworth's answer:
First the foundation. My artist mother who trained my eyes. When a
boring (to me) visitor arrived, ‘Watch her hands and do me a
drawing afterwards.’ With her water colour tubes laid out on a
white enamel tray, ‘Which colours would you mix for that sunset?’
Five minutes later, ‘Now which?’ My music teacher. ‘When it
says “staccato”, leave a tiny gap between each note, and for
“legato,” make the notes flow into each other.’ My Dad who sang
while he turned the separator handle for the cream on our porridge.
My bout with polio which gave me five months with nothing to do but
read and observe.
Then meeting haiku in my 50s. Reading,
listening, attending workshops. No single piece of advice springs to
mind, but gradually three pivotal messages crystallized. 1. Learn to
recognise a haiku moment. 2. Note it down straight away. 3. Choose,
change, chop, and chisel your words till you make them sing.
Copies of the taste of nashi: New Zealand Haiku (Windrift Haiku Group, 2008) are still available for sale. Find all the deatils here.
Friday, February 24, 2012
Straight From the Haijin's Mouth #1
'Straight From the Haijin's Mouth' is one of the features that makes up my haikai column in a fine
line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry. This edition is from the September 2011 issue, and is reprinted with the kind permission of Laurice
Gilbert, Joanna Preston and Owen Bullock.
Straight
From the Haijin's Mouth
I asked this year's NZPS International Haiku Competition
Judges, Joanna Preston (Open) and Owen Bullock (Junior), 'What is it
about haiku that keeps you coming back for more?'
Joanna
Preston's answer:
It's less a case of ‘what keeps me coming back’ than haiku
refusing to let me go in the first place! Every few years I decide I
want to leave the genre alone for a while, but something will happen
that just can’t be expressed in any other form, or that announces
itself to me that way. And then I'm astounded all over again at the
depth and complexity of the genre. For me it's that shock of
recognition, of purpose, of rightness, that’s crucial in all
poetry, but most powerfully concentrated in haiku. And there’s no
better training for a poet – to be precise, to be good at
recognising exactly what elements of a scene or experience are the
really important ones, and to be as supple in meaning and frugal in
expression as possible. You feel the really good ones in your body,
as a physical impact, as well as in your mind. So maybe my need for
haiku is a form of addiction, the way runners can come to crave the
endorphin high. Or maybe it's the nuclear physics of poetry – the
power to blow the world apart packed into a tiny, seemingly innocuous
package.
Owen
Bullock's answer: I
love the variety that is possible in haiku, and the depth that is
sometimes held by such few words. That depth is like a lake, you can
swim on the surface or dive deep, chase sticks or skim stones. But it
is always about what is real, what is experienced, grounded in
sensation. The technique is hidden; the approach of the best haiku so
subtle that it is as if no effort goes into it, that it tumbles out
of the sky fully formed. Haiku takes me by surprise more often than
other forms of poetry.
My own search as a poet is for truth
and simplicity. Truth, in this context, means a faithfulness to what
actually occurred. The simplicity required to frame the experience is
a great lesson and training ground for any and all writing.
waiting . . .
a leaf falls
into my lap
~from
wild
camomile
Read
more from Owen on his website
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Monday, November 21, 2011
NZPS Special Call For Submissions
Call for submissions for a special edition of haikai café to commemorate the one-year anniversary of the 2011 earthquakes in Christchurch (22 February) and Japan (11 March).
This will appear in the March 2012 issue of a fine line - The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society.
Please send up to five haiku and/or tanka for consideration to Kirsten Cliff with 'HAIKAI CAFE' in the subject line. (NZPS members only)
Unpublished poetry is preferred, but previously published works will be considered (if credit supplied).
Deadline: 31 January 2012
(Note: a fine line is always looking for Feature Articles "to encourage informed debate, and to assist readers to improve their understanding of poetry." See the submission guidelines here.)
This will appear in the March 2012 issue of a fine line - The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society.
Please send up to five haiku and/or tanka for consideration to Kirsten Cliff with 'HAIKAI CAFE' in the subject line. (NZPS members only)
Unpublished poetry is preferred, but previously published works will be considered (if credit supplied).
Deadline: 31 January 2012
(Note: a fine line is always looking for Feature Articles "to encourage informed debate, and to assist readers to improve their understanding of poetry." See the submission guidelines here.)
Wednesday, September 7, 2011
An Update on the 2011 NZPS Anthology
I just found this information on The New Zealand Poetry Society website, regarding poems submitted to The 2011 Annual International Poetry Competition:
So, you could still have a haiku chosen for the 2011 NZPS anthology edited by Linzy Forbes. Watch this space :)
"We regret that due to circumstances beyond our control notification of poems selected for our anthology were not made before the end of August. We apologise for the delay, and request that entrants wait a little longer before submitting their poems elsewhere. We are sorry for the inconvenience."
So, you could still have a haiku chosen for the 2011 NZPS anthology edited by Linzy Forbes. Watch this space :)
Friday, July 22, 2011
A Haiku Journey
I walked unannounced into the world of haiku. I’d never encountered it before, never been taught it at school. Even when living in Japan for six months I never crossed paths with haiku.
Haiku for me now is like an old friend: comfortable to be with, always there for me through the good times and the bad, with an honest heart which will still challenge me when I need it.
My haiku journey began when I moved to Bay of Plenty in 2005, joined Tauranga Writers' a year later and heard about the Katikati Haiku Pathway.
On New Year’s Day 2007, I was alone with a longing to begin my year with something new. I felt a need to discover the external world, yet at the same time explore the world deep within myself. So when everyone else was heading to the beach hungover, I drove forty-five minutes to the calmness of the Katikati Haiku Pathway.
I strolled, I sat, I listened, I looked, I touched, I smelled: I wrote my first haiku. I absorbed all that was on offer that day and found what I'd been searching for: a new way to express myself.
Haiku just seemed to ‘fit’ me. It was concise, to the point, I felt I knew where I stood with it. There were no long descriptions, no flowery language to get lost in. Just good honest observations, where every word and line break was important, and carried a depth that would reward the present reader.
Most of my poetry at that time stemmed from observations: moments in time that stayed with me and begged to be created into something. Sights, sounds, and sensations that enticed my body to grasp pen and paper, and then record the occasion in its rawest and truest form. Haiku allowed me the opportunity, gave me the tools to do justice to my experiences.
I read all I could about haiku in print and on-line. It wasn’t long before my first haiku were published. Then six months after my visit to the Katikati Haiku Pathway, I set myself a challenge: from my 30th birthday on 31 July I would write one haiku, every day, for a year. It was this huge task that really taught me the craft of haiku, and elevated all my writing to the next level.
It did this in two main ways: honing my observation skills, and refining my ability to clearly convey what I wanted to say.
Writing haiku means living life using all your senses. Not just listening to what a person says, for example, but looking at the way their eyes light up over certain topics, the way the sunlight picks up different colours in their hair, the smell of their perfume, the temperature of the room, the background noises. Taking in all these aspects when interviewing someone for an article (which is what makes up half of my prose writing work) brings to life your experience of your time with that person. The reader gets a more rounded view of the interviewee, and your article is more enjoyable to read as it is richer, deeper. Working and playing with haiku has made me become more observant to the world around me, and this can’t help but enrich all of my writing.
Writing haiku involves capturing the beauty and fullness of a moment, in about 10 words or less. Working with haiku has improved my ability to convey what I want via the written word. I enjoy wordplay more since reading and writing haiku: it's taught me the value of each word and it has expanded my vocabulary as I’ve searched for the right words, in sound and in meaning, to form those few short lines. The challenge of writing haiku has lead me to an uncluttered writing style, in both my poetry and prose.
I've only been writing creatively for six years but much of that time has been spent on the art of haiku. I see so many possibilities with this form and I’m experimenting with it and extending my knowledge all the time. My latest project is developing a collection of collage-style haiga (haiku with images) about my experiences of going through treatment for leukaemia. Yes, my old friend haiku was there for me then, too.
This piece appeared as the feature article in a fine line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society (July, 2011).
Haiku for me now is like an old friend: comfortable to be with, always there for me through the good times and the bad, with an honest heart which will still challenge me when I need it.
My haiku journey began when I moved to Bay of Plenty in 2005, joined Tauranga Writers' a year later and heard about the Katikati Haiku Pathway.
On New Year’s Day 2007, I was alone with a longing to begin my year with something new. I felt a need to discover the external world, yet at the same time explore the world deep within myself. So when everyone else was heading to the beach hungover, I drove forty-five minutes to the calmness of the Katikati Haiku Pathway.
I strolled, I sat, I listened, I looked, I touched, I smelled: I wrote my first haiku. I absorbed all that was on offer that day and found what I'd been searching for: a new way to express myself.
Haiku just seemed to ‘fit’ me. It was concise, to the point, I felt I knew where I stood with it. There were no long descriptions, no flowery language to get lost in. Just good honest observations, where every word and line break was important, and carried a depth that would reward the present reader.
Most of my poetry at that time stemmed from observations: moments in time that stayed with me and begged to be created into something. Sights, sounds, and sensations that enticed my body to grasp pen and paper, and then record the occasion in its rawest and truest form. Haiku allowed me the opportunity, gave me the tools to do justice to my experiences.
I read all I could about haiku in print and on-line. It wasn’t long before my first haiku were published. Then six months after my visit to the Katikati Haiku Pathway, I set myself a challenge: from my 30th birthday on 31 July I would write one haiku, every day, for a year. It was this huge task that really taught me the craft of haiku, and elevated all my writing to the next level.
It did this in two main ways: honing my observation skills, and refining my ability to clearly convey what I wanted to say.
Writing haiku means living life using all your senses. Not just listening to what a person says, for example, but looking at the way their eyes light up over certain topics, the way the sunlight picks up different colours in their hair, the smell of their perfume, the temperature of the room, the background noises. Taking in all these aspects when interviewing someone for an article (which is what makes up half of my prose writing work) brings to life your experience of your time with that person. The reader gets a more rounded view of the interviewee, and your article is more enjoyable to read as it is richer, deeper. Working and playing with haiku has made me become more observant to the world around me, and this can’t help but enrich all of my writing.
Writing haiku involves capturing the beauty and fullness of a moment, in about 10 words or less. Working with haiku has improved my ability to convey what I want via the written word. I enjoy wordplay more since reading and writing haiku: it's taught me the value of each word and it has expanded my vocabulary as I’ve searched for the right words, in sound and in meaning, to form those few short lines. The challenge of writing haiku has lead me to an uncluttered writing style, in both my poetry and prose.
I've only been writing creatively for six years but much of that time has been spent on the art of haiku. I see so many possibilities with this form and I’m experimenting with it and extending my knowledge all the time. My latest project is developing a collection of collage-style haiga (haiku with images) about my experiences of going through treatment for leukaemia. Yes, my old friend haiku was there for me then, too.
This piece appeared as the feature article in a fine line, The Magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society (July, 2011).
Friday, July 1, 2011
It's My Birthday This Month & I'm Giving YOU Gifts!
Yes, July 31st is my birthday and I'm celebrating with you by having a book give-away!
Become a 'follower' of Swimming in Lines of Haiku this month and I'll put you in the draw to win a copy of the taste of nashi - New Zealand Haiku (Windrift, 2008).
standing naked
in moonlight -
the taste of nashi
~Sandra Simpson
It's easy!
As July 31st 2011 is also the 2nd anniversary of my engagment - if I have more than twenty new followers during the month, I'll also draw a winner for a 2nd book, Before the Sirocco - The New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology (NZPS, 2008).
autumn wind
following her footsteps
through the leaves
~Sophia Frentz
Do come and join me at Swimming in Lines of Haiku where I explore my poetry journey and help you with yours by offering discussion and information on competitions/workshops/calls for submissions and websites/books/people of interest.
Become a 'follower' of Swimming in Lines of Haiku this month and I'll put you in the draw to win a copy of the taste of nashi - New Zealand Haiku (Windrift, 2008).
standing naked
in moonlight -
the taste of nashi
~Sandra Simpson
It's easy!
- Sign up to be a 'follower' via Blogger or Networked Blogs.
- Once you're a follower, please leave a comment on one of my posts and I will put your name in the hat for the draw.
- One entry per person during the month of July, 2011.
- Winner drawn at random on 2nd August, 2011.
As July 31st 2011 is also the 2nd anniversary of my engagment - if I have more than twenty new followers during the month, I'll also draw a winner for a 2nd book, Before the Sirocco - The New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology (NZPS, 2008).
autumn wind
following her footsteps
through the leaves
~Sophia Frentz
Do come and join me at Swimming in Lines of Haiku where I explore my poetry journey and help you with yours by offering discussion and information on competitions/workshops/calls for submissions and websites/books/people of interest.
Tuesday, June 14, 2011
A Rainbow of Queer Ku
Last week, one of the NaHaiWriMo prompts was in honour of Gay and Lesbian Pride Month: Write about sexuality, gender identity or pride in general. I posted a few of my previously published haiku and senryu on the subject (all inspired by true events) and thought it would be good to gather them here in one post. I'd love to be part of a queer haiku (and related forms) anthology some day. For now: Enjoy!
through the smoke
dark red lips
of a drag queen
Published in Kokako 8 (April, 2008)
karaoke night
watching her adam's apple
bob
Published in Kokako 12 (April, 2010)
Commended, NZPS International Haiku Competition 2009
Published in moments in the whirlwind (NZPS Anthology, 2009)
sharing fries
they hold hands
under the table
Published on Haiku News online (Feb, 2011) in response to this article - McDonald's WiFi censors out glbt sites on GayNZ.com
through the smoke
dark red lips
of a drag queen
Published in Kokako 8 (April, 2008)
karaoke night
watching her adam's apple
bob
Published in Kokako 12 (April, 2010)
| Photo taken, and peace cranes folded, by Kirsten Cliff |
marriage ceremony
both wear white
her dress her dress
Commended, NZPS International Haiku Competition 2009
Published in moments in the whirlwind (NZPS Anthology, 2009)
sharing fries
they hold hands
under the table
Published on Haiku News online (Feb, 2011) in response to this article - McDonald's WiFi censors out glbt sites on GayNZ.com
Monday, June 13, 2011
Inside the Mind of a Haiku Competition Judge
Joanna Preston is the 2011 judge of the adult section of the New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition. Over at her blog, A Dark Feathered Art, she is posting about her experience and it all makes for very interesting reading.
So far she has posted -
Joanna is co-editor of Kokako - New Zealand's only specialist haiku and related forms journal. She has edited the NZPS annual anthology three times; this is her first time judging for the NZPS. You can check out her books here.
So far she has posted -
- ‘An island entire’ – judging the NZPS 2011 Haiku comp (check out the comments section on this one where she gives a great explanation to a reader's question - what is haiku?)
- Whittling soberly – the preliminary deliberations
- Dawn, reprieve, and mercy – the preliminary deliberations continue
Joanna is co-editor of Kokako - New Zealand's only specialist haiku and related forms journal. She has edited the NZPS annual anthology three times; this is her first time judging for the NZPS. You can check out her books here.
Wednesday, April 27, 2011
NZ Poetry Society 2011 International Haiku Competition
Haiku (including senryu) entries must be received by 31 May
Prizes: The top five haiku/senryu will be awarded NZ$100 each. In addition, the 1st prize winner will be awarded the Jeanette Stace Memorial Prize of $150. There will be up to 20 commendations.
Judge: Joanna Preston - a Tasmanaut poet, editor, and freelance poetry teacher. Her first collection, The Summer King, won both the 2008 Kathleen Grattan Award and the 2010 Mary Gilmore Poetry Prize. She co-edits Kokako magazine, and was the 2001 Haiku Competition winner.
Entry fee: NZ$1.50 per haiku; for NZPS members every 5th haiku is free. PayPal on site.
Go here for all the entry information.
This was my submission for week 13 of 2011 (part of my goal this year to submit to a poetry competition or publication every week).
Prizes: The top five haiku/senryu will be awarded NZ$100 each. In addition, the 1st prize winner will be awarded the Jeanette Stace Memorial Prize of $150. There will be up to 20 commendations.
Judge: Joanna Preston - a Tasmanaut poet, editor, and freelance poetry teacher. Her first collection, The Summer King, won both the 2008 Kathleen Grattan Award and the 2010 Mary Gilmore Poetry Prize. She co-edits Kokako magazine, and was the 2001 Haiku Competition winner.
Entry fee: NZ$1.50 per haiku; for NZPS members every 5th haiku is free. PayPal on site.
Go here for all the entry information.
This was my submission for week 13 of 2011 (part of my goal this year to submit to a poetry competition or publication every week).
Monday, April 4, 2011
March Round-Up - The Three "P"s: Poetry, Prose & Photography
Here's how I'm doing on my 2011 goal of submitting poetry to a publication or competition every week:
I also submitted an article to a fine line, the magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society, which will be published as a feature article in the July issue. Super pleased about this as I've wanted to see an article of mine there for some time (about time I submitted one!). It's about haiku, of course :)
I completed one haiga for my collection exploring my journey through leukaemia, making a new total of 26 pieces, and wrote four new tanka. I'm starting to think about getting the poetry collection together to enter into chapbook competitions, but I'm not sure yet if that is where I want to head with it. As I'm still writing and have over a year of my leukaemia journey left, it will be a while yet before I would seriously consider a complete publication.
For now, I'm sending most of the haiku and tanka I wrote late last year out to journals so I can be sure that it's of a high standard and can stand alone without needing the context of the collection. So far one tanka has appeared in Kokako and three tanka are forthcoming in Presence. I'm awaiting news of submissions to other journals.
I've done a lot more with my photography this month than my writing, and that's just the way it goes sometimes. After two straight months of writing one-a-day, I got to worrying in the second week of March that my poetry writing had stopped short! All I needed was to remind myself that as long as I'm having fun and doing something to quench my creative thirst then all is well with me.
I submitted some images to Four and Twenty for consideration as cover art and editor, Vinnie Kinsella, accepted one for the June issue. :) Yay! I also submitted my cover image for Kokako, which was accepted by the editors, so that's all go for September.
St Patrick's Day saw me spend the afternoon taking my sister's pregnancy photos. We had fun and got some great shots. I'm sure she won't mind me sharing this one seeing as I'm not showing faces or mentioning names (yes, I have more than one sister! more than two, in fact! and two out of the three are pregnant, due a mere six weeks apart!).
- week nine - submitted two tanka and eight haiku to paper wasp (first time submitting here) awaiting outcome
- week ten - submitted an experimental haiku to the HaikuNow! Innovative Haiku Contest (first time submitting here) results out in April
- week eleven - submitted one senryu and three previously publsihed free-verse poems to the 2011 Jacar Press LOVE Anthology (first time submitting here) closes April 30th
- week twelve - submitted a haiku to the HaikuNow! Contemporary Haiku Contest (first time submitting here) results out in April
- week thirteen - submitted eight haiku to the New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition, closes May 31st
I also submitted an article to a fine line, the magazine of the New Zealand Poetry Society, which will be published as a feature article in the July issue. Super pleased about this as I've wanted to see an article of mine there for some time (about time I submitted one!). It's about haiku, of course :)
I completed one haiga for my collection exploring my journey through leukaemia, making a new total of 26 pieces, and wrote four new tanka. I'm starting to think about getting the poetry collection together to enter into chapbook competitions, but I'm not sure yet if that is where I want to head with it. As I'm still writing and have over a year of my leukaemia journey left, it will be a while yet before I would seriously consider a complete publication.
For now, I'm sending most of the haiku and tanka I wrote late last year out to journals so I can be sure that it's of a high standard and can stand alone without needing the context of the collection. So far one tanka has appeared in Kokako and three tanka are forthcoming in Presence. I'm awaiting news of submissions to other journals.
I've done a lot more with my photography this month than my writing, and that's just the way it goes sometimes. After two straight months of writing one-a-day, I got to worrying in the second week of March that my poetry writing had stopped short! All I needed was to remind myself that as long as I'm having fun and doing something to quench my creative thirst then all is well with me.
I submitted some images to Four and Twenty for consideration as cover art and editor, Vinnie Kinsella, accepted one for the June issue. :) Yay! I also submitted my cover image for Kokako, which was accepted by the editors, so that's all go for September.
St Patrick's Day saw me spend the afternoon taking my sister's pregnancy photos. We had fun and got some great shots. I'm sure she won't mind me sharing this one seeing as I'm not showing faces or mentioning names (yes, I have more than one sister! more than two, in fact! and two out of the three are pregnant, due a mere six weeks apart!).
| Photo by Kirsten Cliff (c) 2011 |
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Sunday, February 20, 2011
Sharing a Haiku for NaHaiWriMo - day twenty
I'm writing a haiku a day for NaHaiWriMo offline. Here at Swimming in Lines of Haiku I'm sharing one of my published haiku each day:
Commended, New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition 2009
Published in moments in the whirlwind (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2009)
marriage ceremony
both wear white
her dress her dress
Commended, New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition 2009
Published in moments in the whirlwind (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2009)
Monday, February 14, 2011
Sharing a Haiku for NaHaiWriMo - day fourteen
I'm writing a haiku a day for NaHaiWriMo offline. Here at Swimming in Lines of Haiku I'm sharing one of my published haiku each day:
Published in Before the Sirocco (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2008)
between outstretched
t o e s
summer breeze
Published in Before the Sirocco (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2008)
Monday, February 7, 2011
Sharing a Haiku for NaHaiWriMo - day seven
I'm writing a haiku a day for NaHaiWriMo offline. Here at Swimming in Lines of Haiku I'm sharing one of my published haiku each day:
power outage
he show me
Orion's belt
Published in across the fingerboards (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2010)
power outage
he show me
Orion's belt
Published in across the fingerboards (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2010)
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
Sharing a Haiku for NaHaiWriMo - day one
I'm writing a haiku a day for NaHaiWriMo offline. Here at Swimming in Lines of Haiku I'm sharing one of my published haiku each day:
navigating
these country roads
the curl of her hair
Highly Commended, New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition 2008
Published in Before the Sirocco (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2008)
navigating
these country roads
the curl of her hair
Highly Commended, New Zealand Poetry Society International Haiku Competition 2008
Published in Before the Sirocco (New Zealand Poetry Society Anthology, 2008)
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