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Friday, October 5, 2012

Forever Home: A Tanka Sequence with Margaret Dornaus #7


the angular roof
beneath marshmallow clouds . . .
an old Chocolat factory
          enveloped, even now
          in the sweet breath of summer 
                              

                    Berne, Switzerland, 1998 (click on image to enlarge)

Tanka & photograph © Kirsten Cliff
Tanka appeared in LYNX XXVII: 3 (October, 2012)
in "Forever Home" a tanka sequence with Margaret Dornaus


To start with the first post in this sequence click here.
To see Margaret's tanka and pictures for "Forever Home", 
visit Haiku-doodle.

1 comment:

  1. One of my favorites from the sequence, Kirsten! I love that line: "the sweet breath of summer" juxtaposed with "marshmallow clouds."

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